Untitled from Andrei Tsvirinko on Vimeo.
Watch this video. You will see the issue is pacing. It needs to move faster. Jan's part is not bad, because there are many shots, and the very end, when he finishes and leaves is the best, because a lot happens in two shots: we go from him pulling out the flashdrive to running; that looks good. I also like some of the shots of Jan. The Fitz part we can work on. Mind you, this is a rough cut, and much can be done in editing to help it, but the filming does need to be faster paced.
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